Today for our writing we did a quick write.
We had to write to describe a koru. Here is my writing. I hope you like it.
Monday, June 28, 2021
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Hi my name is Tanche' from mangapapa school I really enjoyed your piece of writing because you explain what koru is I liked the way you described it you said the koru twisted like a cats tail maybe next time you should re-read your writing and see if you made any mistakes like I can say when you said the koru twisted like a cats tail I noticed it didn't make sense it needs an is so after you read my comment you should probably change that the other thing I enjoyed is your background it shows me what it looks like and thanks for making this amazing blog post I really enjoyed it have a great day.:)
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